Teachers feedback: Opening shot is great, think about lingering with your title though, it flashes up too fast Dancers clearing out of the hallway needs to be longer, the audience won’t understand what they’re seeing with it so fast 2 after effects needed Great combo of establishing shots, just needs credits in a creepy font coming on and off the screen in a clever way that matches the music (maybe an after effect idea?) Music is effective, just needs another layer to intensify it (maybe a violin holding some creepy notes??) when stalker appears? Some great dancing shots Think about transitions you could have, especially for dancing shots. Look up superimposing images across one another to create a better flowing montage Think about the reveal of the creepy stalker, include slow motion maybe, real intense sound effect? Something to make the audience increase in tension and suspense Eerie sound effects needed to layer over creepy part where stalker is added to the picture Not sure...