Preliminary Task 1-Rough Edit


Teachers Comments
  1. Title-font and background choice effect?
  2. Work out transition between establishing shot and first part of action
  3. sound levels-hand washing
  4. flashback-make clear with transition. different color? color grade?
  5. music is good
  6. slow motion/effects over flashback action
  7. play around with shot duration, quicker shots
  8. layer sound effects for suspense
  9. play around with the moment at the dumpster
  10. credits at the end
  11. special effect

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